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Old 08-24-03, 05:24 AM   #19
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Um half of you kids are wack as fuck who have voted....you're acting like Mic had no good shit, Chrit didnt kill shit, this is how it was.

Chrit

Another record ruined... Just call Chrit the poser exposer/
This cat's career is over like P.A. when I had to expose Soldier/
first line was pretty shit, second line was alright, nothing special, soldier/exposer dont really rhyme though

50 battles since July??? C'mon dun.. dont you gotta life?/
Bout to give you a wake up call with more slaps than E. Honda's cheating wife/
first line was gay, second line was pretty nice, decent punch, nothing special

How'd you ge that record? Mics verses suck worse than a fucking airduct/
Bout to make you throw in the towel quicker than a Hindu before a haircut/
first line was wack, second line was a nice punch

Prepared for boxing match but you'll never connect with those punches that are telestrated/
Bout to feel Chrit's fist up through ya jaw... and leave ya mindstate elevated/
first line was decent, nuthin special, second line was weak

See my flows instinctive watch how it causes and endless chain of tech-falls/
Mic's shit is just too primitive to win... Hell he cant even hang with neanderthols/
first line was decent, nuthin special, um that was hell weak for an ending...nothin that made my jaw drop

Overall this verse was decent, nothing special, i didnt see any ill wordplay or hard hitting punches, no nice personal disses that made my jaw drop, no multiz, it has a nice flow though, so overall id give this verse a 6/10

Mic

Now u dead Chrit this verse "bust ya top off" like a "shaken up two liter" Evolution, Regime Bitch You a Fagget That im pimpin// 1
Your “shots missin” me like “blind nurses”with “needle-equipment”// 2
First line was incredibly stretched, the wordplay was kind of wack, nuthin special, second line was nice, wordplay wasnt really ill but it was nice

just face it..ya childish like bein' scared of tha dark-in-ya-basement// 3
in a battle wit MiC? I suggest you stand-guard, cuz tha only way you'll beat me is if u gimme a hand-job// 4
first line didnt even rhyme with anything..... secomd line was decent, nice wordplay, nuthin special tho

If You put a “bullet hole” threw “My Heavyweight belt” you still couldn’t get a “title Shot”//5
tha closest u came to wordplay is when you were 8 foolin' wit A-B-C-blocks!!// 6
first line was nice wordplay, really liked that, second line was nice wordplay again but its megally played wordplay, so no props for that line...decent bar

Your verse is “un-interpretable”,I have to get a wackness “translator”// 7
Chrit's “arguments” will be “unheard”, like ya is a signlanguage “debater”// 8
lol this bar had me laughing, first line was nice, and second line was nice wordplay and a hard punch!

Your lyrics are *soft*, and what adds to that is that they're published in *paper-back*// 9
Can't catch MiC when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back // 10
hmm, first line was decent, seocnd line was weak, especially when u rhymed the same words from the first bar...

Overall this verse had some nice wordplay, decent punchlines, no nice personals, no multiz, the flow was choppy, but overall it was a decent verse, id give this a 6.5/10

On the whole, I think Mic took this battle, because he used more wordplay and he had nicer punchlines, where chrit had not much wordplay, and decent punchlines, nice flow too, but i still think mic took this,

I cant poll yet, just putting in my 2 cents....peace