I wasn't feeling the beat, your lyrics, nor the whole concept of this, too be honest. Maybe this is just completely awful to my ears or I'm just not giving it a chance.. Naw, I think it's the first one, because you just lacked a good voice, sure you had somewhat of a mic presence, although your voice is just.. Not that "hard," you could say. Eh, not too sound rude, nor mean, just keeping it real..