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Originally posted by dark
boring.
do you think because you are rhyming , that it is a flow?
and you used the word 'freedom' 4 times in a row
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Shut the fuck up...U whack bitch , anyways this piece was Hot , U had tight wordplay and multies , The content was Hot......It had a Nice flow too it.....Ur rhyme Scheme was aight....But next time , dont make the same word rhyme twice......For example u used Freedom at da end of ur lines 3 times..That was really weak....Next time dont do dat..............But u got talent dawg , I am looking forward too read more open mics from u......Nice shit dawg