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Old 08-24-03, 04:52 PM   #5
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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GYRL!!!
I loved this. I really really loved it. DAMN it makes me mad just to read it..Its so true.

>Remember how we used to care for eachother, no matter what had happened before
Remember we said we'd always be there for eachother, like we really had something more

^great line.

>I remember your face, and I remember your words
But I still don't think I got treated the way that I deserve

OMG. I feel you on that one gyrl.

>I do Remember How when I tripped, you were there to catch me before my fall
But It was too late for me to realize that all I was to you was a b00ty call

^Perfect way to end it..Really powerful last line..I been there before, I know what it feels like, But I went through it all over again reading this poem. Nicely Written, no doubt.
I liked it a lot.
Stay up with this gyrl and keep em comin.
Peace!
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