I liked the peice for the realness of it. Been there with that "Friends with benefits" mess. It does always turn out that way. And we do always miss them, because the part most women want was never ever touched by us. You brought the realness with this peice gurl, the vocab coulda been stepped up but I think, even though I think it was unintentional, it let the feelings in this peice shine through. Even though the imagry and the vocab lacked in this peice I think you've struck a nerve with the realness and all the truth you put in it. I agree with DaGyrl... that was a really good way to end it. Lookin forward to more, peace