This is one DOPE ass piece! I still don't see how the title is fitting.

I'm really feeling this piece. Everything is one point, and the topic is just ridiculously ingenious. Presentation was up there as well.

"It's only night time when you're shunned from the sun
Like Chuck D said it's easier to forget me than to come get me
Fight for peace, fuck for virginity
Since when is drugs, supremecy and mysoginy the holy trinity
You got a second for your son mother?
I'm trying to talk, it's either that or fight or run, brother"

-this segment was nice, enjoyed the catch 22 feel of this particulary section.

"I came out in the fetal position never wanting to stand
Because I knew my legs would crumble underneath me"

-I liked this. way to use nature as an excuse.

"I could of painted it black, but thats politically incorrect
Paint it African American, and paint it with respect"

-I thought this segement was funny. Society prides itself in being politically correct (right).

"I hate men impaling women through their torsos"

- I'm not sure how you actually meant this, but I understood it as torsos being a synonym for heart.

Really nice to see a topic like this and then to have a piece written so well about it...

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