Very impressive...
I was taken back at first by the length..
But I've found often that the longer pieces
tell more of a story..and usually hold my
interest all the way through
as did this one...

I don't know what lines were taken from what
But this line:

"Fight for peace, fuck for virginity"

Really caught my attention, such a cliche, but I'm
loving that...not only the irony...but the practicality
of it...very nice

But alot of this piece caught my attention...
It's nice to read some stuff from you again...