You used some real tite imagery, you stayed on topic and set up real quite graphic thoughts on the topic...Your flow stayed strong throught...virtually flawless

instead of being a life sever id rape women for my sins pleasure

That line was real clever...more stood out but that made the most impact with indepth meaning

...Liked this piece alot...Deep

oNe...

Hit up my battles honestly in Front lines...mad slept on