Shiznit's THoughts:

Despite the raw emotions presented in this piece, it showed the true visions of reality you have at the moment.

Terminology didnt help much at all because u came hard and direct to the point. Imagery was subtle.

The whole piece intended to surpass somethings that you may have wanted but didnt reach and was afraid to even try. The urge of what u think how your life is affected your perspective from being determined to strive.

It seems to me that you have something in your chest that you really wanted someone to acknowledge and the emotions acompanied the ultimate desire to execute such an inspirational piece.

Couldve added a little bit more and if were internal meaning attach creatively, it would be better.

It was good.

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