Shiznit's Thoughts:

Very creative piece.

The idea surrounded with such great imagery often reflects the true agenda hidden in every words.

There's a tendency of 2 mammals fighting, when you think of it literally, but the main idea executed had the power to overcome something metaphorically.

Brilliant contruction of terminology. As you read from the beginning to the end, it was gruesome and yet felt like a part of it.

Seems to me like the image of two persons being torn apart by a massive threat in life or for some reason a big fat elephant getting in their way.

Very nice intelligent poem. I liked the title too. Props.

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