Shiznit's Thoughts

TO be honest with you i really like this a lot. I mean no joke, while i was reading it. I felt like being a part of the whole piece.

VOCABULARY/WORDPLAY

>Youve used mostly sincere enough terminology reflecting the whole piece. Multis spread out here and there helping it came together. It was brilliant. The words cooperated very well in the structure of every line.
The fairness of reconstructive ability to execute most of the words with determination and directly affects detachment to each verse, meaning, each word had a very unique expression depending on how you revived and supported the idea.
> Meaningful yet subtle exaggeration of metas and combination of speeches.

FLOW/RHymeScheme

> Arrangement of the words from every verse fitted the smooth response on how to express them out loud. Syllabication can be helpful in this type of writing but yet in this case, not necessarilly needed. The attachment of emotions and reliable
connection aspired the very inner scheme detailed as they are spoken.


CONTENT

>>Such outstanding emotions covered all throughout. Love the fact that it was written in such an inspirational way. Would just make me think of how things cant always work out the way we want them to be but there are other alternative hangin every try on working them out. Its like there's a different plan for them.

OVERALL

>>affectionately beautiful. Worth the time reading.

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