killer lines
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Originally posted by DeadlyVision
u'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel....
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem tryna get in Anb crew but he couldnt compete on that level...lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5&pagenumber=12 (Anb Declined his try out..lol)
Dabanga??you'll hit the street, soon as you hear that squeak from the metal...
f*ck peace, our beef isn't settled...you'll be in pieces and pebbles...
You're whack! A bunch of crap sorted in rhymes...
I feel like a red margin...how I slaughter your lines..
22 losses ur rhymes will neva be felt...
ur punches are shit..so they will reflect and u'll diss~ yaself..lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ight=WALLBANGER (he made a thread at bitchslap to battle someone but he became a pussy and declined..lol)
possibly win because you have no punches/
Flex a Forty-Five Banga Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
Check ya pours kid, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
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Quote:
Originally posted by DaBanga
man that shit was when i was a newbie.....fuck you dumb..i didnt know shit......w/e heres my verse
this bitch writes his crew name on his walls cause he aint got no life/
picked jackin off himself rather than havin a hot ass wife/
bitch i'll bury you like a dead animal, cause thats all you are/
got a letter from penthouse and rejected it with ease/
10 free editions...but couldnt pay the fees/(lol free)
this cat just like flintstones vitamens, chewable and safe for kids/
only time he got close to spitten hot shit was in his underwear skids/
i'll hit you more times than 50's been shot and kill you faster than a fat man runnin from police get caught/
your rhymes are funny and make me laugh alot,rhymin bout shit older than under-the-desk-snot/
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[b]categorical break down
dv took multi's, personals, flow, vocab, opener, closer, creativity, structure (& rhyme scheme)
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banga disses, wordplay, complexity, punches, metaphors, gayness
vote: dv - though a close one
advice - in end it's because a lot of banda's initial bars got wasted on homoerotic disses....THOSE ARE GAY....it doesn't work....it's more gay to think em up and you do impact your opponent.....nobody wants to know gay details.....especially when you go into such faggotness....it wack and played...you really wasted so many bars....disses work better when something complex comes out of creative workings....that's advice.....you two needs to straight out your bars structure....STOP GOD DAMN STRETCHIN'...PARTICULARLY BANGA.....loose gay insults....dv insult your opponents more....or at least when you talk about yourself use it to diss them....not brag like it's some open mic ego trip....aight.....you'all need to improve on the categories you didn't
take and perfect all categories in general through practise...