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Originally posted by cokeyace
yo i can easly spit and riches the thing u know how rap is
sandwiches dog i'll put outta yur mysery son the only way u gets
recognize is black history month look nigga this chapter is done
what u get outta this anotha loss son shit ain't funny when start
losin it probably don't bother cause that's tha only thing u doin yo
look i'll battle whoeva but if nigga go against me dey ain't cleva
this nigga desperate for some holla at yur boy ace a.ka. young
buck
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^please please STFU!!!!!!
Now on to 215 i understood everything you were trying to get across. The flow was smooth and you stayed on top of the topic all the way. The vocab was light but i think you planned it that way. not only did i understand you plight i sympathize...............
No matter how nice your raps form on this forum, these niggas still ignore ‘em//
Like you ain’t got skills, and they call ill what real rappers call boredom//
They poor ‘em on the boards, with childish and immature metaphors//
Spitting verses versus real bol’s ( boys), but they still feel the rewards//
Everything about this piece shows a natural talent and i'm pretty sure you're a dope audio head too.......8.5/10