you know it really doesn't matter what your point meant. It's what others interpreted. If you write thinking that everyone should understand it the way you wrote it, you wouldn't get feedback. this was a personal piece, people who view this will try and find a common ground with it so they can relate or else they wouldn't like it. Poetry is art, and we all look at the Mona Lisa differently.

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