i fell in love with this as soon as i read it, almost saved it in my fave places. But as i scrowled down and found your explanition of it all, i found that in some spots i got what you meant but others it shook me to read what you really meant. and it makes me understand it and love it more, this in my opion is one of the best pieces ive read in a long time. i could feel deep emotion, awsome flow, great vocab, everything!

the biggest thing in it here was


But respect only the woman, because I hate the black man
I hate the white man, I hate the yellow man, I hate every man
I hate men impaling women through their torsos

if it wasnt for your explanition i probly wouldnt have looked at these words twice, but man

Y'know I see so many men abusing women it's not funny. And yet those women love those men that abuse 'em. I know I'd never abuse a woman, I guess that's why they don't love me.

that there got me i dunno but im pretty sure you could make me fall in love with you, without abusing me, man look at me im a mess, ive already got a crush on you just because of this piece lol

man i loved it everyword, makes me want to put even more effort into my shit. PEACE

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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