yeah, I appreciate the effort man, I can see potential in the lines but it seemed to me that you ain't using your ideas our to their fullest.

I'd say throw in some more 3 sylable words or some more complexity to it cuz it's kinda simple.. alliterations and maybe a multie or 2 would help ya flow too..

but not bad stuff... my fav line cuz of the flow would be

"i don't even got to diss you no more, i don't got too
i got all my friends that'll truthfully stomp you"

again it could have been expressed better like not repeating in the first line, but I liked the flow.

keep elevating dawg,

-Ie