ayo BITCH as i have mentioned to u several times before and like F-i (bllllaat cap like a semi) just sed u can only have two threads on the front page at any one time ur lucky im not a mod or u would have long ago have posts closed or deleted, though i did read the poem and it is nothing like your previous works. I actually liked it i must admit i doubted your depth and knowledge of vocab but this piece was teeming with intelligent emotions though at some parts it seemed dry and or redundant the overall effect was good, one final thing is that the ending was flat and dead your didnt really capture the end but the rest was gortex steps away from the rest of your lukewarm pieces, congrats, 1luv.