dunno man...jus not feelin it.

the drum sounds could be better...n it sounds like you doublin up on sum of the hits so it comes out unclean. n i agree wit xkwest on the melody.

if u trying to develop a unique style n your workin sum new direction that's fine..... but a top quality track still needs to have crisp production n i don't think you there yet. but keep writin yo....i wrote 100+ beats before i started postin shit.

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