MOB your verse had good flow and there was consisent punches in there but they seemed to be played...

Dynamatic you had better structure your verse flowed as well if not better...You had some nice wordplay but wasn't consistant adn didn't seemed played

breakdown even further...

flow-tie
strucure-dynamatic
punches-MOB
wordplay-dynamatic
personals-MOB

This is down to personal choice and that Dynamatic didn't have played lines....

vote-Dynamatic