Thread: Life it can be fucked up.....
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Old 08-26-03, 07:29 PM   #4
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quote :Pretty deep man...
had some good metaphors up in there kid...
It could have had better flow, but thas aight...
and yo, some lines didn't quite rhyme together...
thas just me thought... -1-

was a good piece keep it up 1
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