How quickly did you do this? I'm interested...because it was quite personal, yet 'profoundly solid'. At times more than solid.

It was compressed fairly well. Couldn't see any loose parts. Bringing an intensely flowing atmosphere of your varying yet fairly focused thoughts.

And worked it to a very good ending.

Vocab was used with real strength. Using 'lesser used' words to real good effect.

Okay, so at times i felt your elaborations were a un-even in a not so good way.

but nonetheless, a quite fine piece indeed.

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