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Old 08-26-03, 09:43 PM   #2
shiznit
Tampons are expensive
 
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There's no hurt in trying at all. I mean at least you had to guts to post your stuff on here even if you know that you have to be ready for critisms either good or bad.

Alright, here's the thing...Your chosen terms are not well enough thought out. Much more basic than simple. The diss interpretation was kinda weak. You couldve put better metas for your wordplay. It would strengthen some of them as a whole.

To be honest..it had some weaker points and flaws. Not gonna hurt if you ask for help. Everyone can help.
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