Complemented each other quite well.

Using raw personal emotions with fairly profound thoughts. Lightly 'salted' with historical references.

But it was that use of raw personal emotions, without them over flowing, that made this piece so appealing. Brought it to a strong level of depiction.

Had a very poetic feel to it too. Especially in flow. Didn't concentrate too much on sticking to a rhyme scene. Which i find can come off quite rigid. Especially in open mics. When not done right.

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