obviously skills won but ur not quite as good as u think

ur flo is way off ur lines are way stretched out u got punches n wordplay but u need to get rid of all those fillers words and shorten ur verse to a nice neat paragraph and get to tha point quicker it makes ur punches and style much more effective and outstanding.......um...........ya

vote $kill

like ur keystyel that was good make ur whole verse look like that