i've read a couple of your pieces and i think you have quite a bit of talent i liked this poem just like the others nothing really bad to say about them nothing really good either, my issue is this.......
you've made it clear you live in the hood most of us can relate, however eventually the subject matter becomes "played" you are going to get negative criticism no matter what you do,....you can't satisfy everyone all the time. Don't be afraid to expand your horizons and do something different. In short you'll never know until you try.............don't think I'm hating I'd just like to read something more complex from you....i'm pretty sure you're capable of it.....1