... umm yea
i guess some people will find this funny, i dont. Lyrically its good. The atempts are getting an internal rhymes scheme were noted, while not done well. While doing something original in this day and age are damn near impossible the little statment at the end

If anyone is offended...

sealed this as STRAIGHT EM COPY

if thats not what you were going for then i dont know what to tell you 4/10

take that how you want