Thread: Simple Flow
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Old 08-27-03, 01:10 AM   #2
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WOW...
when you said simple i didnt think you meant it. Given that it was simple it was still done fairly well. I managed to find the flow, it just seems that the pace moved up and down throught the whole thing. The vocab was VERY simple, but none the less you got the point across (less is more?). I was kinda confused as how to take these line:

and i be makin lots of cash-got lots of stash/
burned u like cig ash-im lethal like a posionous rash/

where the "-" suppose to make the words go faster... i tried like 3 times to find the rhyme.

'Sides that it was good.... 6/10
next time try complex flow (not sure what that is)

P.S. HOW THE FUCK DO YOU HAVE THE SCROLL BAR THING IN YOUR SIG... I WANT ONE
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