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Old 08-27-03, 02:23 AM   #1
Pre Tense
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I just want some feedback !!!!!!!!!!

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I just want to know if my shits gettin any betta. Check out
"The Murderer" to.


I don't know why, I try, to please everyone around me
It's my demise, I sit aside, and cry
As my whole world crumbles and dies these lies
Are killin me inside
what did I ever do to deserve this
I never did nothin to no one to have shit returnith
It's like I killed an army of men, or just an army 10
Either way my life just bitch slaps me over and over again
I grew up lonely never bothered a single soul
Even in highschool I was bold but still followed the pen
I pray each day that I will wake wit some other life, besides the life, thats mine, rewind
But nothin changes cause I open my eyes to find
ANOTHER DAY I HAVE TO DEAL WIT THIS IT'S FRIVOLOUS

What the fuck am I eva to do, If I never have a direct effect on whether I win or loose
It's so tormenting the creation my mom left behind
Is somethin that no one will ever cherish but just parish in time
But thats fine cause I know theres nothin left for me
IT'S MY FUCKIN LIFE I'LL SWEAR IT I DARE IT SHINE


PEACE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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