as a rap that could've been some deep shit but as a poem, i didn't feel tha meaning u were tryin to get off, i understood u know tha whole sorry thing but tha lines u made didn't have that edge that a poem has, it seemed as if it was a "The Raven" or another poem that has a sentiment but sadistic reality to it, i felt u had anger at tha same time that u had sorrow which is good for a poem but it really didn't go well wit tha topic of tha poem, if anything, it could've been betta if u would've said u were sorry for a lot of straight out things and said u were sorry for like lookin at other girls, or not thinking about her when u were alone or something like that, jus keep writin u'll gain a sense of the topic towards wat u write