i have to agree with prophiit the flow was great, and it did have the mother goose feeling, but it worked for this piece, it was good.

i too was a bit lost to what the whole subject was, at the first i was thinking that you lost something to you that meant alot, like a gf or a friend. then it seemed like you were trying to take your mind off things by looking for something to do in thi room, but there was nothing down there that needed your help. i know im way off, but everyone sees art in their own eyes, and poems here are art.

welcome to RB and i'll be waiting for your next drops LOVE

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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