It's really hard to get my flow across by just typing because I put a lot of emphasis on different words. I use each line as a seperate breath or movement in my flow (if that makes any sense.)

And my commas as a step or a tight fittin flow ( I don't know why, (PAUSE) I try,(PAUSE) to please everyone around me
It's my demise, (PAUSE) I sit aside, (PAUSE) and cry).

My italics are just simply an aggresive emotion in my vocal tone.
I hope this helps to understand my shit a little betta.
Peace...........