Heh. I liked this. It was solid. With some light humour here and there. Esepecially the orange line. It just came out well. It was placed right.

There were hints of irony, sarcasm and what not. Not really 'lit up' as much as i felt it could've been. And the ending was a bit of an anti-climax. I felt there could've been something more profound there or something.

A question about the ending actually, is the 'drugs are cool' line part of the piece? Is that a follow on from the 'falling off the chair' line? If it is, i'd say that makes it a bit better.

Overall, a nice piece. And a nice enough read.

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