sorry for not getting back to you on this man this
was really well done instead of what necro said
from the first look...

skimming over...
third times the charm but you fucked up four bars
literally and the random effect of it made it seem
like something id wanna listen to..and anyone that
reminds me of nas ( Poison-Stillmatic..saying poison)
with concepts and lyrical capabilities gets and okay
from me anyday

actually reading......
your vocabulary was good ans well as the flow of things...
many people wont think something flows because some
us may have manuy styles and abstract deliveries but
this here would sound good in audio..with another verse
attached to it....if you do audio....once again well done