yo... this was aight... I like how you chose to rap about different aspects of that topic...
shit was aight for a first topical verse...
and yo in my opinion, it's harder sometimes trying to have strong vocab, multies and flow when writting a topical than it is just straight spittin... sometimes the messege suffers... just gottah try and find a balance between all those things... Just keep at it, you'll get it soon enough...
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