I really became angry with you when I was reading this poem, to think that you actually said all those things that you said you did. I don't blame her for not talking to you. God I would have had you killed

But still, I hope you show her this and I hope some comfort for both of you comes from it. Atleast you said what you wanted to say. As far as structure and flow of the poem itself. It wasn't too bad, I actually liked the repeatative lines I thought that not only added "bulk" to the poem, but they solidified the meaning behind it.

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