hmm... let me see

flow was easy to find but just for presentation purposes you should fix it up. The vocab was VERY simple... and my pet peeve
is usless number:

B4

LSD scared 2 be
alive about 2 take a nose dive
2 think this is all a crime
watch all tha pigs come outta the hive
time to make love 2 my 37 wives

being that this is TEXT i am looking to see if the numbers add up or something, so i suggest if you just need to say 'to' then put it in. also when you put 2 i think you mean two which makes no sence in some line

4/10
I know you can do better... hit the books

take that how you want