I didn't read any responses so i don't know if this has been said yet so here goes..............

I looked at this as a message from god. Meaning there is a higher power up there watching everything we do both good and bad. THere is deep thought in this poem and some really good flow. I like the repeating line "I watch" it gave me an eerie feeling for a minute like someone was actually looking at me!!!!! Even though it was extremely short I really liked this poem. Gave me a sense of relief in a way like 'yeah someone is watching over me'. In short I think this piece had great message and other than the length I wouldn't change a thing..........thanks for the experience. 1