what contest did you win..and where at?
how old are you? what did you win?
~ive only won T-shirts in high school~

this does definately make you think about a
lot of things but also leaves much more to be
desired as well....

was there more to your last section that made
your poem stand out from everyone elses?

I almost overslept for work this morning but
it was raining hard and this loud thunder came
out of nowhere and woke me up quickly..
which never happens...in a way I believe
god was helping me there...

this was okay..kinda suprised tat this was a winner
though...your real version had to be at least twice as long..

maybe not thogh....if anything congrats for taking the contest
but this leaves a lot to be disired on the topic of the matter..

peace