dark and i could here a bit of melody in your words.....I agree with everyone else your vocab was a little basic but i see the elevation already. nice piece keep working though. Another thing is you had decent emotion in this....something most emcees forget about....if you can't hear emotion in your words then how can you translate it through a mic? You can't it would be nearly impossible....keep at it as i said before...you're elevating eeryday.