aight, this is wut i think. Funda-Mentalz started out strong.
then you gotta lil lazy in the Middle and End..
wordplay was decent but all your barz kept switchen lenght like you were in 3 different battles..over-all..good verse..LONG tho.
Curse fed off your Verse alot. And that made his verse a lil stronger on the Punches.
curses verse had a tiny bit better flow too.
close battle, but ima have to give it to Curse..
cant poll vote yet, but i aint a Newb.
see...these are good werdplays...an proper quotations/ when ur "quotes" arent right an lines have no relations// 10
so after u read my verse...please take notes/ of intelligent rhymin...where if u did 'audio' ud still 'tryta use quotes'// 12
i liked that alot.^^
Fuck Sleeperz.
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