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Old 08-28-03, 03:34 AM   #8
Dr.SeusS
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aight. Biddy Had better Vocab. your punches lacked a Lil.
seemed like you concentrated on Vocab more this Battle.
your ryme scheme was Good...(the flow)...
when i was reading your verse, in some parts it felt like-a Run-on...overall verse was good tho.

I liked M.OB's punches better. your flow was a lil more choppy,
but your punches made-up for them. that r.kelly shit is Played out tho. to the Max.

We can all Ryme U dyke But only the Best can Metaphorically Write.........This kids in Way over his head like Ninjas holdin a swords In Gun Fights/

i liked that^^^sick

close battle, vote=Mob.



fuck sleeperz.
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