i've peeped and responded to a couple of your open mics and the thing that makes this one stand out is the structure......it gives your words feeling....drew me in. Now that dosen't mean it was devoid of wordplay and multi's for example------------

They aint no Robin Hood just Robin from the hood-
Slobbin Thompson for a bag of that good-

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then you say you aint got it like im gonna pawn that for something to snort-
concrete athletes im just disabled in this sport-

these lines stood out not only it which the way they were constructed but also what they mean the newport line man..............i've been there and sometimes lapse back to that mentality. As always excellent drop. 1