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Old 08-28-03, 07:04 AM   #2
prophiit
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the vocab and flow in this was str8 sicc. Aptly titled as well because it took me waaaaay back to when i actually went to church and i felt like i was getting one of those real poignant sermons.

Fallen unto uncanny hearts…which beat in intervals far, far apart
Am I a vision of self-image…or just a soul who portrays grimace?

^unanswered questions/lack of faith/loss of faith

what else can i say deep emotional well written piece. 1
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