the beat is crazy...i'm definitely feelin this beat....yea like split said before, your vocals are too low on the delivery, and i dunno if its just me, but this looks and sounds like a fast pace rappin beat....like sumtin you should be rappin a bit faster, then rhymin laid back and slow....did you ever think about it??....well i dunno just sum i thought about while i was hearin it .....the hook was ok, maybe you should pick up the volume on your voice a little so it can match up the beat...this was a good track, just fix wat needs to be fixed and you set to go.....OnE






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