"I slap the spectaors witha dose of insomnia
open the flood gates and expose the sheer rhymin' of../
a prodical mind, my phnemonal grind is credit
to edit the dept of days used to pay dues"

yeah, I agree, it was a pretty tight intro.. I liked the flowing of the second line into the third..

it was an interesting style and concept which always gets props in almost any rapping community, so I was feelin' the expression.

I think the whole thing about money in the early parts to the middle was a bit played out and could have been a bit more diverse, but it was alright.

I think that the magnum line and a bit after were some pretty good lines, but I think misplaced in the piece and sort of took away from the concept.. don't get me wrong, they were fine and all, but it just seemed like the wrong place for them.

The flow througout was good and there was obvious experience throughout the lines because it showed good flow through different methods.

Overall, this was a good drop with a pretty tight conception for the most part..

peace,

-Ie