aight thanks for your honest comments
and Preacher about yo comments, they're deeply respected, but I guess that my intention with that first line was just to create this like 'dark atmosphere' and just contradict it. To make it seem like an impossible love or something.
But your comments are appreciated and I'll try to rewrite the piece from your point of view.
You're right about starting it with picturing the sunrise, I'ma try to rewrite, thanks for ya creative ideas

peace