wow dope piece
I felt it... the use of vocab, flowing, wordplay, just some tight shit.
From the first line to the last you kept my interest and that's just what's it's all about. Just reading the first line, made me wonna read further.
I love how it's not a played out topic or something,... just something all of us go through at some moment in time.

eI wish to fly on wings of grace, my brethren…. to direct true love to all who are heroine'

^^^nice line

Keep dropping
Peace