Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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hey girl this was something i felt, i loved the ending just like most ppl seemed to, thought you could have brought vocab up some thou, but the emotion made up for it here. me im not a fave of the whole repeating thing, but this piece was good with it, it seems to go with it. anywho not much else to say i guess other ppl got it all, just keep postin with your talent
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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