It held strong. The basis was there, and you went with it. Unrelenting.

It was a smooth read overall. Mainly because of the simplicity. If you'd made it more complex, some of the off points would've made it akward to read.

vocab sometimes used to a bit off. Not in terms of not meaning what it was meant to mean. But just where/how it was placed.

Overall, a nice enough read. I did get some good imagery from this.

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