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Old 08-28-03, 08:08 PM   #3
Pre Tense
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(if i thought for a second, it's a second i lose/
i gotta be quick to decide in which path i'll choose).
I thought this was a good start to the second verse, but then I lost ur flow. I caught what u were tryin to say, I just woulda worded somethings different.
Overall I would give u 6/10
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